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S.I.N.S: The Settlers

The latest Short I'll Never Shoot (aka S.I.N.S.) is actually the first page of a script I'll probably never flesh out. It's called "The Settlers" and instead of falling in love, it's about being in a relationship. Most likely, it would focus on a group of friends: a single guy, a lesbian couple, a married couple, and a couple who are considering tying the knot. The last group are featured in this opening page.

I have some random ideas for scenes so I might just post them here every now and then but I haven't figured out a way to make it come together as a single script. I was thinking about making it a web series but I'd want to get a bunch of microscripts together before I commit to it. By microscript, I mean just short 1 - 4 page ditties. I think that when a web series or online video hits the 4 minute mark, it loses a lot of views. When most people are sent a video, they are only willing to commit to a couple minutes. Three minutes seems like a commitment. Four minutes usually meets with an "I'll watch that shit later." A "later" that usually never comes.

The same could be said for blog posts that stretch past three paragraphs so I better wrap this up. WIthout further ado, here's the opening salvo of "The Settlers".

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P.S. know the format of the script might not be exact (you're not necessarily supposed to bold the headings in film scripts) but I feel like it makes it easier to read so I did it for the blog.

EDIT: Re-reading it this morning, I get that it helps if there's something to really hit home that the two people we are seeing are together (hence the picture of them together behind Julie) but I have no idea why they'd have a picture of themselves hanging in the bathroom. I must have summoned my inner network exec when I made that note to myself.

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