Update from my previous post. I wrote up another 10 pages for the Cowrite contest.

Again, these pages follow the winners pages and need to move the story or characters ahead a bit. I banged out 12 pages last week but I thought they were flawed. Not only did they seem a little too raunchy for the contest but I also had a problem with the second 20 pages ending in a very similar spot as the original ten pages. Sure, what the audience and the main character knew had changed but I wasn't sure that was enough.

So last night and today I threw together another ten pages. These pages are a little more in line with that I think the judges are looking for although I can't say that they are anything that I'm overly proud of. Some decent stuff but I wasn't blown away by the original winning submission so I think this could do just fine.