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Cowrite: First 10 Pages

I have to say, I'm a bit disappointed with my attempt at the first ten pages of the COWRITE contest. I liked my set-up but the jokes just weren't there and I barely got through introducing the characters in the first 12 pages. Also, I have no idea where it would head, which can't be a good thing. Well, in this case it could be what they're looking for since the next ten pages would have a lot of room to work with but I can't say I'm at all confident in my chances of winning round one. Here's one example of the lame jokes that populate my first 10.

I couldn't get the scrippets function to work so if for some reason you want to check out my foray into the Cowrite contest, you can just click HERE.


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